Developmental Editing

Developmental editing is for writers who have a full or partial draft and want detailed, thoughtful feedback on their work and its potential direction. I focus on key elements like structure, pacing, character development, clarity, language, and emotional resonance. My process is rooted in listening closely to both the writer and the work. Together, we’ll identify what’s working well, what needs revision, and the best steps forward to strengthen your story


Editing Packages & Pricing

> > Manuscript Assessment

A focused, thorough read-through of your full manuscript to identify strengths, challenges, and big-picture opportunities. Includes a detailed editorial letter with actionable feedback on story structure, character, pacing, and overall impact. Perfect if you want feedback & direction without line-by-line notes.

What’s included:

Comprehensive editorial letter

1-hour Zoom call to discuss feedback and next steps

Email support throughout the process

Pricing: $475–$550 (final quote based on manuscript length and complexity)

>> Full Developmental Editing

The full works: an in-depth line-by-line editorial read with margin notes plus a detailed editorial letter covering structure, pacing, characterization, and more. Includes two Zoom calls for brainstorming and feedback. Ideal for writers ready to dig deep and revise thoroughly.

What’s included:

Editorial letter + plus detailed margin notes

Two 60-minute Zoom calls

Email support throughout the process

Pricing: $995–$2,500 (final quote based on manuscript length and condition)

>> Memoir & Non-Fiction Projects

Whether you're writing a memoir or tackling a nonfiction project, every compelling narrative
needs a strong backbone. This package is designed for writers with a partial or early draft who are seeking clarity, cohesion, and confidence in the structure of their work. Together, we’ll shape the structural spine of your manuscript and trace the thematic through-line, so your story or argument resonates with purpose and integrity, true to your voice, not an outside mold.

What’s Included:

Guidance on shaping a clear, intentional structure

Help identifying and refining your central theme or message

Manuscript Assessment and comprehensive editorial note

Actionable next steps tailored to your project’s stage

Ideal for memoirists and nonfiction writers in early stages, with partial drafts or loose material in need of cohesion and direction.

Custom Quote Based on Manuscript Length and Stage

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